--- web/www/contents.inc	2001/10/24 10:37:25	1.25
+++ web/www/contents.inc	2001/12/09 18:06:07	1.27
@@ -14,26 +14,30 @@
 
        <p align="justify">
         <a href="screenshots/"><img border="0" src="screenshots/thumbnail-reports-raptor-load15.gif" width="100" height="107" align="left"></a>
-        All i-scream components now function to initial
-        design parameters and our system is regarded to be complete.
-        <b><a href="documentation/">Documentation</a></b> is available to assist third party programmers
-        in producing Hosts for use with the i-scream server.
+        The "project" stage of i-scream has finished, leaving the
+        system in a completed state. Since then the goals have
+        changed from completing a project to producing a useful
+        and functional product.
+        <b><a href="documentation/">Documentation</a></b> is
+        available for people wanting to try out the i-scream
+        system, and our code is availabel via <a href="cvs.shtml">CVS</a>.
         Our progress during the project can be found in the meeting minutes.
-        Code is viewable via <a href="cvs.shtml">CVS</a>.
+        Work is still continuing to adapt and improve the i-scream central
+        monitoring system as a product for use in networked environments.
        </p>
 
        <p align="justify">
         <a href="screenshots/"><img border="0" src="screenshots/thumbnail-winhost-main.gif" width="100" height="62" align="right"></a>
-        
         The i-scream Distributed Central Monitoring System Reports
-        are now visible on the web.  If you are <b>not</b> a local user, then you may
-        view some of the output in the <b><a href="screenshots/">screen shots</a></b> section or you may view some
-        static example content on the <a href="reports/"><b>Reports Demo</b></a> pages.
-        You may view the latest information about each machine, historical 24-hour
-        reports and alerts for each machine.  Our own i-scream server is running constantly,
-        along with several hosts to enable plenty of data harvesting.  If you would
-        like your i-scream web reports to be linked from this site, then please email us
-        at <a href="mailto:dev@i-scream.org.uk">dev@i-scream.org.uk</a>
+        are no longer visible on the web.  You may view some of the
+        output in the <b><a href="screenshots/">screen shots</a></b>
+        section or you can sample some static example content on the
+        <a href="reports/"><b>Reports Demo</b></a> pages.
+        You may view the latest information about each machine,
+        historical 24-hour reports and alerts for each machine. If
+        you would like your i-scream web reports to be linked from this
+        site, then please email us at
+        <a href="mailto:dev@i-scream.org.uk">dev@i-scream.org.uk</a>
        </p>
 
        <p align="justify">
@@ -49,7 +53,7 @@
        
        <p align="justify">
         <a href="screenshots/"><img border="0" src="screenshots/thumbnail-alerter-email.gif" width="100" height="107" align="right"></a>
-        The latest builds of the i-scream Distributed Central Monitoring System
+        Builds of the i-scream Distributed Central Monitoring System
         are now available for <b><a href="/downloads/">download</a></b> from this
         website.  To assist in our addition of features to the system, we
         would be extremely grateful to receive feedback from anybody who has
@@ -82,9 +86,12 @@
         was aimed at the UKC Computer Science department, and as such
         we believed that a demonstration to the &quot;customer&quot; was important. The
         feedback from our demonstation was more positive than we had
-        anticipated. We believe that the system may now be of great
-        interest to anybody who wishes to monitor a number of machines
-        on their network using a central configuration.
+        anticipated. We believe that the system may now be of interest
+        to anybody who wishes to monitor a number of machines on their
+        network using a central configuration. The i-scream central
+        monitoring system is now being used by the UKC Computer Science
+        department, and their feedback is being used to further improve
+        the product.
        </p>
 
        <p>&nbsp;</p>
@@ -100,7 +107,7 @@
         Copyright issues immediately ruled out anything involving Mr Whippy,
         so we had to settle for <i>i-scream</i>. And thus, we were left with a cunning
         play on words - it still sounded like <i>ice cream</i>, yet also
-        served as a functional decription of our system - namely, one which
+        served as a functional description of our system - namely, one which
         screams at somebody if something has gone wrong...
        </p>
        <p align="justify">